Friday, May 30, 2014

I love your flaws!

It was their anniversary.

She decided to make his favorite pound cake, the simplest and the one that he savors besides all creamy, moist and fluffy ones.

They both cut the cake, and when he tasted it, he smiled and said, "I think it's high time to take you to an optometrist", and then thrust the piece of cake into his wife's mouth.

She tasted it, her face went gruesome, and they both burst into guffaw looking at the salt-replaced-sugar, pound cake.


With the salt cake, their 40th anniversary too was marked unforgettable, filled with laughter and false twits, in no way less than the previous years!


written for FSF by lillie McFerrin. This week's prompt is Marriage.
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19 comments :

  1. Shailaja VMay 30, 2014 at 10:30 AM

    Such a beautiful blend of comedy and love. I hope many couples find that type of happiness in their lives. Beautiful photograph too!

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  2. UnknownMay 30, 2014 at 10:37 AM

    Thank you so much, shailaja ji :) It is indeed a pleasure to be read by you pros!!

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  3. Anita SabatMay 30, 2014 at 10:59 PM

    Touching one, Priya. Salty but so sweet :)

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    1. UnknownMay 31, 2014 at 4:52 PM

      Wah, thanks anita :) Nice to hear it from you!

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  4. Lisa ShambrookMay 31, 2014 at 8:03 AM

    I really love this one...this is what makes a marriage...laughing together x

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  5. Donna B. McNicolMay 31, 2014 at 9:33 AM

    Wonderfully told, love the sentimental mixed with the comedic touch.

    D.B. McNicol
    Romance & Mystery...writing my life

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    1. UnknownMay 31, 2014 at 4:53 PM

      Thanks a lot, Donna :) Welcome to my blog!

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  6. Midnight scribblesMay 31, 2014 at 11:57 AM

    Hahah aww that was cute!
    Ps you know weirdly I was diary writing last night..I dont publish those.. But that's what I was writing about, flaws. And suddenly reading this now just I dunno hit that click in my headd. Hi5! :D

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    1. UnknownMay 31, 2014 at 4:55 PM

      He he.. thanks little girlie :) Hi5 to you too :) Now, should i say, great minds or fools?? Just kidding :0 ;0

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    2. Midnight scribblesJune 1, 2014 at 9:14 PM

      hahaha i dont mind the fools bit :P arent we all silly people ? ;)

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    3. UnknownJune 2, 2014 at 6:51 AM

      Yeah, thats perfect! silly we are!!

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  7. SaahiMay 31, 2014 at 11:47 PM

    That was really cute,the beauty of growing old together..

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  8. Jyotsna BhatiaJune 1, 2014 at 5:56 AM

    hehe.. how cute :)

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  9. kalpana solsiJune 1, 2014 at 7:43 AM

    This is so beautiful and shows how their love and marriage has matured with age and time.

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  10. jeydeviJune 2, 2014 at 2:09 AM

    Wonderful priya!! Reminds me of our thathas n paatis!!! They were n are living examples to our generation

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    1. UnknownJune 2, 2014 at 6:54 AM

      @ jyotsna, thanks:)
      @ Kalpana, true! a living example of matured love! thanks :)
      @devi, true devi! they were the epitome of perseverance :) thanks yaar!

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  11. Jaded RebelJune 3, 2014 at 2:28 AM

    Thats really nyc! It bought a smile to my face:-)

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