Write Over the Weekend inspiration for this time
So, what would you do if you are told that today is the last day of your life? Will you hurriedly attempt to do everything in your bucket list or would you retrospect about life up till now, instead? Your blog post should start with the line, “It is 6 in the morning…”
It is six in the morning, a last morning
as it should be.
No cries, no conflicts I would
hear tomorrow, nothing I would have to resolve, no worries to spare my heart
for.
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I fancied myself for the mixed emotions
that seized my heart, a sickening burden and a relieving sigh, both being
extremities.
"I spare you for your
children!" the note from God said, and I consoled myself that the
outburst of tears was not because I was spared to be fenced in the same old
bond in the same old Earth, but because I could not get a glimpse of the new world I would be in, the Heaven or the
hell.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda and a part of FSF by lillie McFerrin( This week's prompt is 'fenced')
That was very nice, Priya! Very different.....unique thoughts!
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Thanks shilpa, will do for sure :)
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short and different :) good one :)
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Short and sweet :) nice one, Priya!
ReplyDeletethat was very nice..a different treatment to the prompt!
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Thanks Tina, welcome to my blog :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a powerful one, Priya and so well written with a bang:)
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Thanks a lot, vishal :)
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